Another sig.

[Bodybag]

please tell me what you think and if you like it or not and what i can improve on.. i kinda followed a tutorial but i changed some things around. xD

 

 

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a110/muchhaste/4lifesig.jpg

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Nicely done ^_^

[Leon]

nice

[clickflick22]

Composition is a little unbalanced, but it still looks quite nice for a beginner.

[Bodybag]

well thanks click.. im glad you see me as a beginner because im not.. i didnt even remotely say anything close to being a beginner in any thread.. in the other i said i had started back up into photoshop since i took a break.. but thanks ur cool.....

[clickflick22]

well thanks click.. im glad you see me as a beginner because im not.. i didnt even remotely say anything close to being a beginner in any thread.. in the other i said i had started back up into photoshop since i took a break.. but thanks ur cool.....

Aw sorry mate, I thought you said you just started Photoshopping, I feel like an asshole now.

[Bodybag]

its ok but what do you mean by the composition being a little unbalanced.

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)

 

i thought that everything flowed rather nicely.. is there something wrong that maybe u could say so i can improve on?

[clickflick22]

its ok but what do you mean by the composition being a little unbalanced.

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)

 

i thought that everything flowed rather nicely.. is there something wrong that maybe u could say so i can improve on?

Try placing the render in the middle, with it on the left the side it's unbalanced, think of a scale.

 

Left and right side need to be even.

[SpEeD]

i think he means everything looks a little jumbled, and its lacking flow

 

also, work on the contrast a bit

 

 

[SpEeD]

Try placing the render in the middle, with it on the left the side it's unbalanced, think of a scale.

 

Left and right side need to be even.

 

not exactly, rule of thirds.