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[nublife]

Hey guys, my friends and I made a youtube channel of gaming (cod,halo4,bf3,MOH warfighter) so if you to give a look ill leave a link here and if you enjoy subscribe We Puke Rainbows - YouTube if you want to play with us add me on xbox : RedditLegion. thanks and have a good day

[Bob Loblaw]

I think it's because english isn't your first language, but your commentary (general speaking) is very disjointed and hard to follow, you pause mid sentence, very frequently, for seemingly no reason.

 

I'm not trying to be rude, just giving you tips to work on (commentary based channels generally need to be very charismatic), so aside from knowing what you're talking about and actually having content with it, this is the other main point for a successful channel. In reality, it's probably of #1 importance.

[nublife]

thanks man

[Tweezy]

I do like your channel. You know your stuff and I can see that English isn't your first language. You stutter I little and some words do come out a little weirdly. Be more confident on the microphone! I don't know if you are doing this already, but how about you try doing a voice over instead? Get peoples views on it before uploading to youtube.