Another MS-Paint Adventure?

frosty · April 3, 2014

Include Taylor Swift o.o

get the fuck out

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Vick · April 3, 2014

get the fuck out

Elemental · April 3, 2014

so, I just finished your old story and I hate you for quitting at that moment, but I'll love you once again if you start another one of these

Maybe a space adventure type of theme (Stargate )

or summin creepy as fuck like some SAW scenario with instant-game(story)-over-traps and shit

Spyder · April 3, 2014

Haunted house is a huge cliché and mind wrap seems kind of cool.

Shoie, read the NeverEnd House Creepypasta and use that as inspiration!

Griffin · April 3, 2014

so, I just finished your old story and I hate you for quitting at that moment, but I'll love you once again if you start another one of these

Maybe a space adventure type of theme (Stargate )
or summin creepy as fuck like some SAW scenario with instant-game(story)-over-traps and shit

I agree with this(The space idea of course)

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shoiep · April 4, 2014

Didn't want to necropost so posting this here.

>You pick up the key and insert it into the keyhole. It beeps and you push the button. It slides open and a burst of fresh air proceeds to enter the room. *Is this really.. it's real. It has to be.* >You take your very first step towards freedom.

"Finally f̸͠ŕ̵̢͟͡e̡e͟." >You feel an intense sharp pain in your neck. You were stabbed through the throat.

>You fall backwards. You see a face. "AHAHAHAHAHAHA."

>Your eyes close.

The end.

To clarify.

This marks the end for my first MSPaint Adventure.

Keep posting ideas for the new one, thank you.

Edited April 4, 2014 by shoiep

Sleggie · April 4, 2014

You wake up in a world full of zombies. You're in a wheelchair.

Lockon_Stratos · April 4, 2014

You wake up, feeling dehydrated. you feel your neck "it's patched!" but you are unable to speak, you then look around noticing you are in an abandon shack somewhere in the woods

Spyder · April 4, 2014

Your eyes slowly open. You wake up in what appears to be a white room. You see nurses come in and out but you never see their faces. In the room you look around and see tools that look like they've been used to torture people. One looks like a little scalpel with blood on the end.

You look around and see a sheet over a body. There's blood everywhere under the bed. When the nurse walks in to check on you, you try to ask her what the fuck is going on, but you feel your throat. It's been patched up and scarred.

You remember. You opened the door and a man stabbed you through the throat. You can't speak. You appear in horror when you see the nurse's face: wrinkly, bloody, cut up and burned to a crisp.

What do you do?

(Sorry for the long post)

nick · April 4, 2014

Your eyes slowly open. You wake up in what appears to be a white room. You see nurses come in and out but you never see their faces. In the room you look around and see tools that look like they've been used to torture people. One looks like a little scalpel with blood on the end.

You look around and see a sheet over a body. There's blood everywhere under the bed. When the nurse walks in to check on you, you try to ask her what the fuck is going on, but you feel your throat. It's been patched up and scarred.

You remember. You opened the door and a man stabbed you through the throat. You can't speak. You appear in horror when you see the nurse's face: wrinkly, bloody, cut up and burned to a crisp.

What do you do?

(Sorry for the long post)

You wake up, feeling dehydrated. you feel your neck "it's patched!" but you are unable to speak, you then look around noticing you are in an abandon shack somewhere in the woods

To clarify.
This marks the end for my first MSPaint Adventure.
Keep posting ideas for the new one, thank you.

Why don't people look at edits anymore?

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